What really undercut the power of her decision to destroy the Mercado family was that, thanks to Cayo’s POVs, I knew the Mercados were already on the verge of economic collapse. More than that, and we’re getting into spoilers. Amaya starts on the path to vengeance, but her decision is weakened by how she receives her information and the clear manipulation of those around her. Plain and unpretentious, the descriptions said much with little, and it felt like a nod to an older style.Īnd then came the tipping point, for Amaya and Cayo, and the narrative’s integrity. These opening chapters were complemented by the writing. Cayo’s journey was also the most compelling during these chapters, with real tension and emotion surrounding his desire to put his past behind him and work for the good of his family yet still feeling compassion for his friends who hadn’t escaped that lifestyle. It was great how the children were woven into the story later on.

Ships and sailing, glimpses of Amaya’s character fighting with her persona as Silverfish, and all the little moments with the other children. I can remember it fondly, but a few things kept it from hitting the mark.Īs I said, setting up as a retelling of CoMC is a tall order, so before jumping into comparisons, I’ll focus on just the book and how it stands as its own work.īy far, my favorite part was the first third of the book. I ended the final page with a sense of wry affection. I was so ready to love this book, but it was advertised as a retelling, and it’s hard to compare anything to Dumas’ The Count of Monte Cristo (CoMC). But Moray is a city of danger and secrets, and they’ll never find peace if they can’t face the darkness of the past. Just when the future seems within their grasp, Amaya and Cayo are struck by devastating news, which sets them on a collision course fueled by vengeance and desperation. Back in Moray, reformed gambler Cayo Mercado is one bad decision away from a devastating backslide.

One devious mastermind plotting to bring the city to its knees.Īfter seven years of servitude, Amaya’s debt is nearly paid, and she hopes to return home just in time for her mother’s birthday.

Scavenge the stars tara sim